Clay Art

My class and I, we have been making clay art. It took  3 weeks to get this far. We had to make the base first and then had to scratch the base for my fish to stay all together. I think I will paint the mouth bit white and the rest all different greens.   What to you think of my choice of colour for my fish?

Writing

This is my writing.

With candy in my hands i fall in a puddle ! it was funny.
With great hope I jumped off the bridge !It was actually fun and then I thought.

When I was walking to school My school bag came of I was walking home I found it.
with Great hope my hat I fell into that pond.
While I was walking I accidentally fell until at all and I had a sore nose.
When I was having fun for once my parents stop you from having fun because they wanted me to play a card game instead of on the trampoline.
I liked my first part of the sentence.