Writing

This is my writing.

With candy in my hands i fall in a puddle ! it was funny.
With great hope I jumped off the bridge !It was actually fun and then I thought.

When I was walking to school My school bag came of I was walking home I found it.
with Great hope my hat I fell into that pond.
While I was walking I accidentally fell until at all and I had a sore nose.
When I was having fun for once my parents stop you from having fun because they wanted me to play a card game instead of on the trampoline.
I liked my first part of the sentence.